Out of the Rut: Partner Read

So I read Jaquan Hurt's blog. Most of his entries are short, which is not in itself bad, as recently , they have increased in frequency. I feel there is a lot of elaboration that he can do, but doesn't. It feels a bit like "diary of a cat". He could definitely use more reflection. Also, he should share some specifics about his work. He is currently writing a story for his game, and I think it would be good for him to show some of the story at least. I am not getting a clear idea of his progress from his journals. He does well in documenting the problems he is having, but often does not volunteer possible solutions.